Exemplar of a paragraph for the 1.11 Divergent assessment

Before example:
In costume they have to wear what their faction is.  There is no allowance for being different.  Once you are in that faction, you stay in that faction.

There are four factions,  Each faction is different and has their own rules and uniform.

After example:
Costume is used in the film Divergent to highlight how restrictive the faction system is.  The clothing that the different factions wear is like a uniform, which suggests how many rules there are in this society.  The costumes reflect the roles the different factions perform in society.  In the opening scene, as people walk across the bridge, we can identify immediately which faction each person belongs to by their clothing.  We are invited to think of Amity as the warmest and perhaps kindest group by the warmth of their clothing.  The clothing of the different factions is contrasted, as the blue of Erudite, and the more formal styles, makes them seem more distant and more clever.  We associate formal suits with high paid, intelligent jobs.